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12/04/2010 10:04 am

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@Shanna that was AWESOME! Great job!

@Gypsy - I mean Maureen… oh look you are "Senior member"!

Two places I would like to go is Ireland and Hawaii! but I don't like to fly…. *sigh*
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12/04/2010 11:19 am

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then we won't have your laughing butt here, newb that rhymes with something else, can you say bewb here? LOL
*Waits for Michelle's story*I guess I should wait on myspace
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12/04/2010 12:06 pm

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@gypsy, emily & shanna--great job!
Here is one of mine--


Money doesn't grow on trees. I wish it did. I looked at the lady in line in front of me at the grocery store with her manicured nails and pedicured feet in extravagant sandals. Behind me, another lady, fresh from the tanning booth, stood in expensive designer clothes with perfectly coiffed hair and French fingertips. I gazed down at my ten-year-old shorts with the small rip at the hem and my sneakers with a hole the size of a nickel. This reinforced the sad reality that tree limbs sprout leaves, not money.

At the counter, I made my purchases and ducked out of the store without looking up.  The seven dollars left in my purse was not enough for fancy nails, new sneakers or clothes. Breathing deep, I started my 1987 Toyota, with its noisy muffler and headed home.

As I thought of the women in the store, my money situation weighed heavily upon me. My job paid enough to cover the rent and barely enough to eat for the month. Tears flowed down my cheeks.  

Entering my two-room apartment, the chips on the ceiling and jagged rips in the wallpaper jumped out at me. An ancient lime-green couch/pull out bed, my mother's scratched coffee table, and thirteen-inch television were the only pieces of furniture in the place.  As I looked out the one window to the street below, I wondered how to become a multimillionaire. Having a college degree meant nothing without experience in a big city. My yearly raise wasn't enough to buy a Happy Meal at McDonalds;  I couldn’t afford to re-locate and find another job. Even finding a second part-time job proved to be impossible. Silently, I wished I’d inherited millions, but my parents had left only unpaid bills when they died.

I turned on the television to forget about my own problems. As I moved the rabbit ears antenna and prayed it would work, I patiently waited for the picture to focus. Hearing the news with war, murders, robberies, and children dying, only intensified my sense of despair. I needed to get out to clear my head.

Walking through the local park, I watched two children playing catch. I sat on the cool grass observing their cheerfulness, wondering if I ever was that happy.

"Want to play?" one yelled. I turned around thinking the little boy was addressing another child.

"Me?" I asked.

"Yeah, we could play 'Monkey in the Middle'. You know how to play?"

"Sure!" I couldn't believe that I, an adult, would be asked to play a child's game, but I longed to be involved.

As the hours ticked by, I found myself not caring about money.

"You are wonderful with my kids." The voice made me jump. I spun around and saw a well-dressed lady in front of me.

"I love kids," I mumbled and tried not to check out her fingernails.

"I'm actually looking for a new babysitter four nights a week from 4:30 till 9:30pm. Would you be interested?" she asked.

"You don't know anything about me ..." I began.

"My kids like you. I’ve seen you here before and watched you with them today. They are a great judge of character and so am I. I’d pay $20 an hour and dinners."

My mouth dropped open. I couldn't imagine earning so much money, with a daily meal provided as well.

"I'd love to! I get out of my current job at four everyday, so this is perfect. I'm Lilly, by the way." I shook hands with my new employer, who introduced herself as Angel Treese. I grinned at her name, and my smile widened when I noticed her not-so-perfectly-done fingernails.
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12/04/2010 12:14 pm

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That is a wonderful story, I love it, the world is full of hope and wishes that come true:]
It makes me smile.
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12/04/2010 12:16 pm

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Originally Posted by Maureen Braman-Eckerle:
then we won't have your laughing butt here, newb that rhymes with something else, can you say bewb here? LOL
*Waits for Michelle's story*I guess I should wait on myspace
hahahaha


Which one did you like best? You know I love to write!!


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12/04/2010 12:17 pm

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@Keri I like that. I can realate

Is that a true story?
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12/04/2010 1:09 pm

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Originally Posted by Michelle Propst Rukcic:
@Keri I like that. I can realate

Is that a true story?



Yes, it happened to me right after college. Course, I did change my name in the story though
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12/04/2010 11:17 pm

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Lisa entered her kids bedroom to begin her daily ritual of cleaning up the toys left scattered around the room from the day before. In the corner next to the dresser she found a pile of pencils on the floor and scribbles all over the wall. Lisa cussed under her breath as she picked up the pencils. "Jake, Emma!!" Lisa hollered as she took the pencils back to the desk drawer in the living room. "What Mom?" they asked as they entered the room. Lisa lead them back to their bedroom. "Which one or you has been drawing all over the bedroom wall?" "Not me!" they sang in chorus at the accusation.



"It had to have been one of you, if you don't fess up you are both grounded to your room!." Neither one volunteered so they were told to stay in their room. After lunch and then dinner, the day passed into evening and they both went to bed. Lisa was exhausted and followed shortly behind them.


At 2:22 am, to be precise the desk drawer slowly slid open, a pink Hello Kitty pencil popped out then another along with many more, long and slender, fat and stubby, colorful and plain. One by one like an army off to war, they all jumped to the floor and headed into the childrens room.



The pencils started to erase all the scribbles they made the previous night, unfortunately the ones with chewed up ends only scratched off the paint making gouges in the drywall. The other pencils pushed them aside. They tried to fix the damage but couldn't. Hello Kitty ordered the really long fat one to search for drywall mud, with no luck they had to make a plan. They knew the kids would get into trouble again because of them. Hello Kitty paced and paced trying to figure it all out.


A gust of wind blew a poster off of the dresser and it fell to the floor in front of him. It was a copy of the Mona Lisa, Emma's most favorite piece of artwork ever. The pencil had an idea. All the pencils got busy. They drew that image of The Mona Lisa 8' tall and 6' wide. When the sun started to rise they all fell into place, a pile on the floor.



The sound of wood pinging on wood startled Lisa awake, she boogied into her kids room to check out the sound. When she got there all she could do is stand in shock staring at the image of the painting on the wall, she noticed the pile of pencils on the floor.

"What the hell?"



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12/05/2010 7:53 pm

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@ Kerri, loved it.  I always feel that way around other moms.  Most are well to do around me.
  *btw, are you Elizabeth from myspace?*

@ Maureen, the fourth paragraph had me smiling and I didn't stop for the rest of the story. Oh how I wish the kids scribbles would turn out like a Van Gogh, and I'd be willing to squint to see it, really I would.  If I'd allow the kids to paint by number on the wall it might be possible.
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12/05/2010 7:59 pm

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Originally Posted by Shanna Conway Dixon:
@ Kerri, loved it.  I always feel that way around other moms.  Most are well to do around me.
  *btw, are you Elizabeth from myspace?*

@ Maureen, the fourth paragraph had me smiling and I didn't stop for the rest of the story. Oh how I wish the kids scribbles would turn out like a Van Gogh, and I'd be willing to squint to see it, really I would.  If I'd allow the kids to paint by number on the wall it might be possible.



@shanna--yes, my dear, I am
@maureen--good read!
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12/06/2010 12:06 am

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SWEET!!! I had no idea there wwas a fourm on Facebook!!! This is great!!!! Will there be competitions here too?
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12/06/2010 12:47 am

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Originally Posted by Monica E Phillips:
SWEET!!! I had no idea there was* a forum* on Facebook!!! This is great!!!! Will there be competitions here too?

bite your tongue ms labia
oh and welcome!
and you're fixed* tee.
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Originally Posted by Kerri Bennett:

Originally Posted by Shanna Conway Dixon:
@ Kerri, loved it.  I always feel that way around other moms.  Most are well to do around me.
  *btw, are you Elizabeth from myspace?*

@ Maureen, the fourth paragraph had me smiling and I didn't stop for the rest of the story. Oh how I wish the kids scribbles would turn out like a Van Gogh, and I'd be willing to squint to see it, really I would.  If I'd allow the kids to paint by number on the wall it might be possible.



@shanna--yes, my dear, I am
@maureen--good read!


gracias :]
I wish I could get my kids to just paint anymore, they paint pretty good abstract, I use their paintings and drawings as dividers in my binder that has all of my spiritual stuff in it.
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12/06/2010 8:14 pm

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Originally Posted by Monica E Phillips:
SWEET!!! I had no idea there wwas a fourm on Facebook!!! This is great!!!! Will there be competitions here too?



oooooo! Who would host the first one?
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12/06/2010 9:24 pm

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Cool beans, Stories!!! I need to work on mine, but I am a bit preoccupied with life and my novel right now. I hate revisions, in case anyone was wondering.
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