| 10/23/2011 5:49 pm |
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 OFFLINE | well was one of the first beats i started to create during the days i officially started to make beats (even though i started to make some before then) i still need to finish constructing it in a song type structure but i wanted some feedback on it. i will be making verses for it in the future:
http://soundcloud.com/sheriffahmed/insane-driven-incomplete |
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| 10/24/2011 7:28 am |
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OFFLINE | FYI, here's the area you post feedback requests on..
http://www.fbulletin.com/forum/feedback_area-23539/
In regards to feedback, One thing that I noticed is that I really don't hear a bassline in this. Perhaps it needs a nice bassline to move the song. Maybe a switchup to maybe a faster tempo in the second versse? I actually reminds me more of techno/electronic than a hip hop track, IMO. So, it really depends on what you're trying to go for.
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| 10/24/2011 3:48 pm |
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OFFLINE | i was tryin to go for something smooth at first, then it turn to something that sounds chaotic. i honestly dont understand how to build a bassline :/ |
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