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So these are some lyrics that I wrote and put to a beat a couple years ago, but now I'm looking to resurrect the flow for them and giving these words the attention they deserve. I havent wrote a hook or chorus for this either.

I`m not even sure what kind of beat I`m looking for for these lyrics.  Also, any feedback on the literature itself would be welcome too.

V.1
You say you hate my music, you say I make you angry
I play it too much, your patience is draining
It's not entertaining, its sounds like the same thing
you heard last week on a replay of a repeat
But if I keep saying it, it must be important
If I can recreate it, well then I gotta record it
if you're bored of it, don't play attention
put some ear buds in, ignore my inventions
cause the exit for the is ride is at the end of this tunnel
with this record spinning,taking me place, where you cant follow
Wallow in in pity cause Mickey aint coming back
I'm running fast, if you stop,  you cant catch me
The next thing you're wondering is how I got away
You thought you had me chained with some words on the page
But I erased those notes; wrote in my own passage
Put based on you in the footnotes, surrounded by brackets

V.2
Ok you changed you mind you enjoy my awful music
You think its thoughtful, but sometimes abusive
I've accused you of crushing my dreams of heaven
But I'm the fool for choosing this method as a lesson
But the lyrics, they're curing these unforgotten scars
If you can't hear it, I'm blurring out the harmful parts
The throttles to the floor, the RPMs are climbing
Ill keep recording if you inspire my rhyming
I've been thinking I'm alone on the lonely road
but then my phones rings, and you waiting at home
So stones fly up as I pick up my pace
Im tripping on my laces  in the one man race
I can taste the sweet, as my body falls to pieces
Is this regret of the feeling of being defeated
I don't know, I can't think about anything
It''s like I just wrote up, for some reason Im angry

Bridge
Now the score is even, you love me and hate me
You make me make mistakes, how can I feel amazing
I'm failing all the time, Im losing my focus
You alway ask me, “Yo Mao can you hold this?”|
You know Im always occupied with these half wit projects
I can't relax till I make something into an object
Im a novice, but I walk like an expert
Pretend to know what Im talking about, Im what they call an Eberts.
Today hurts, another verse, some more words to spill

V.3
Wasting ink trying to find a way to rebuild
but the ball point doesnt do half the work my action could do
So all I got right now is a sorry and big thank you
I dont hate you, I was just caught up in the moment
I praise you for the choice that you have chosen
Sometimes Im just boy, making quick decisions
Destroying my toys to make another addition
Or another I don't know or I'll see what happens
If you keep on listening I gotta keep rappin
I'll keep it a random, we'll hear the whole playlist
If you don;t like, Ill  let you change it
Im changing now, cause I dont give a ****
Ill always care enough to give you some love,
because without you, I have nothing
you're my number 1 fan,  nanum munchuni( Korean. English= I am stupid head)  

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do u remember around what tempo the beat was in?

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Thats the original beat it was on.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/348325